I write a review of my day:
I awoke and climbed out of bed... Hum, that sounds like I live in a treehouse. can't say that.
Rather, I stepped out of bed... Humm, My readers might think I sleep standing up. NO.
I slipped out of bed. Hummm, I don't want to appear creepy.
Edited copy:
I stayed in bed all day... Hum, sounds lazy. Is that a good thing?
In bed, I opened my eyes. Oh no... I don't want people to think I was inside the mattress, maybe I should say I was on the bed?
Administrative Decision:
As I lay on the bed I dared not open my eyes... Surely that's a statement my editor will approve of.
LOL - Writing is such hard work.
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